Reko Black

To interject a thought here: You say that I should include a "Why," such as explaining why running is such a joy. Adrenaline rush, Endorphins flush Through my body And ...

Tribute to Breathing Checking out of routine I postpone the hour to dream. At about eleven thirty; Dark, cold, night; Only streets streaming light. Walking out to the gate, Prepared, ...

I agree that this poem is cute in a "I'm bored" kind of way. I am only assuming here, but since you have already mentioned the sun as shiny, then ...

I could picture what you have described here, it was rather ultimate. I'm uncertain why certain stanzas here appear in quotation marks. If the reason for this is in relation ...

Nice little rhythm and simplistic subject matter that alludes to more than you have described. I quite enjoyed this piece and give you two thumbs up for my review. You ...

Fernatical Moist cold, sweat lodge on the rocks Earthen soil, roots and moss The plant kingdom conquers and stands to defend Dark and damp unfurling leaves Shielded by native fortifying ...

There is no rule to say there needs to be a general amount of imagery. Imagery is only one particular tool, this isn't a painting - we rely on many ...

Fastfood Living Something’s wrong... I hate this way; Western Civilization, Fast food lives, Virgin sacrifices. Pain and poison anchor heaven to earth, It’s those monkeys denial. Validation breath

I am in half disagreement with the above. I didn't have a problem with the switching of perspective, as it was contextual, infact I can't grasp how anyone found this ...

I think that it flowed alright. Though, I think the wording was a little ambiguous "nightmare in shining armour" if the poem is declaring love for a person, why is ...